Descriptive Writing

( The Learning) We are trying to improve the detail in our writing to create interesting characters.

I rowed onto the rocky beach. I was feeling hungry.

Suddenly I heard a fiery breath. I saw the monster, it jumped towards me. It’s teeth were big as a dinosaur.

Bradley’s Maths

Bradley have been learning how to solve a maths problem

Castle

( The Learning) We are trying to improve the detail in our writing to create interesting setting( Where the story took place)


I was running through a forest where there was  a spooky large castle and I sawa guard at the door. The window had cobwebs on it and the bricks were rusty with spiders crawling up and down.The drawbridge's chain was rusty, as well. The flag was brand new.